Very nice

O__O

Wow. Great job.

O_O

The Joker

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Introduce a little anarchy. Upset the established order, and everything becomes chaos. I'm an agent of chaos. Oh, and you know the thing about chaos? It's fair! ~ The Joker

Now this is why I like Kimimaro. X3 I wish the horrific elements of his character had been more emphasized. Oh well, that's what the fandom is for right?

XD Aww no! Drawing men murders me too. Yours looks good though.

I don't often write critiques but I hope that this helps.
The flow of the picture is incredible, it all guides to a different area without confusing the composition. The picture is excellent!
However, his forehead dot (cannot remember what it's called, forgive me) isn't drawn in profile.
The obi on his waist seems to have disappeared in the back. It should stick out some more, like in the front.
Another thing that I would like to add is that, in my opinion, his facial expression is too subdued.
I understand that the character himself represses his agony, but since one of the purposes of this picture was to illustrate his pain, it detracts from the impact.

I agree with all of your crit, but I must say that the obi was on purpose... XD. I know its supposed to turn into a giant bow, but I just couldn't find a way to include it... so I pretended it was cut off in battle. ;_;
I didn't use reference, which is probably why the dots (dot...) aren't correct... lol.
As for his expression... you are right. What happened originally was in the doodle, the mood of the picture was intended to be very different. It was going to be serene... with pastel tones. But then the picture changed... but his expression didn't. lol. *ashamed*
Thanks a lot for the comment though, I really appreciate it. *huggles* Next time I'll try to plan for a composition that allows for giant purple bows!

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Spiderman, Spiderman, under that mask he's asian and tan
He will swing, on a thread, through my window and into my bed
Hey hey! Here cums the Spidermaaaaan

XD I hate those stupid bow things. They're hell!
It's an easy fix though
Aw now don't feel bad, crit is supposed to be good thing O_o I need to work on my delivery. You're welcome!
Naw naw naw just take it off next time X3

This is utterly fscking awesome. Gw.

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the colour of insanity in an empty glass

OUCH. Omg, this is so awesome...<3 Love his pose and the detail in the bones.

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"You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake. You are the same decaying organic matter as everyone else, and we are all part of the same compost pile."
--Chuck Palahniuk, Fight Club, Chapter 17 -

o.o OMG This is awesome! I love evrything in it! The detail, the structure, the painting, the pose, the background...it's all perfect! A bilion stars on it! Best Kimimaro picture ever!

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It can't fall into the wrong hands if I got it! 83

RUN LIKE YOU STOLE SOMETHING!

D'awww, thanks so much. *flattered* I'm super glad you like it.

Btw, Lol at your sig. Im a gay... lol.

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Spiderman, Spiderman, under that mask he's asian and tan
He will swing, on a thread, through my window and into my bed
Hey hey! Here cums the Spidermaaaaan

The bones were the most fun to do. Oh so slowly I am learning more about spinal structure lol. Its great.
Thanks for the comment. *huggles*

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Spiderman, Spiderman, under that mask he's asian and tan
He will swing, on a thread, through my window and into my bed
Hey hey! Here cums the Spidermaaaaan